Wordiness and Redundancy

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Revise each of the following sentences to eliminate wordiness and redundancy. To review, see this discussion of wordiness and redundancy (opens in a separate browser window).

  1. It is important for persons to read the notes, advice and information detailed opposite and then complete all sections of the form prior to its immediate return to the agency via the envelope provided.
  1. High-quality learning environments are a necessary precondition for facilitation and enhancement of the ongoing learning process.
  1. At this point in time, our time schedules do not allow or permit further or additional work tasks.
  1. With reference to the fact that the company is deficient in manufacturing and production space, the contract may in all probability be awarded to some other enterprise.
  1. Notwithstanding the fact that these early findings provide some promise, state officials recognize that more information is needed with respect to an understanding of the long-term effects of welfare reform on families.
  1. The scope and range of the Consumer Procurement Guide includes all applicable functions relating to services pertaining to consumer procurement.
  1. Interviews lasted in the neighborhood of 10 minutes each. They were designed to be brief for the reason that it would be easier to get sample members to cooperate.
  1. Overall, 41 percent of respondents said their jobs offered opportunities for advancement and promotion.
  1. Staff members at all levels and in all areas possess the knowledge that our purpose and goal is to help consumers in the attainment of their needs.
  1. In spite of the fact that the educational environment is a very significant facet to each and every one of our children, some groups do not support reasonable and fair tax assessments that are required for providing an educational experience at a high level of quality.

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